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El Perma Shadow · Aug 18, 2009, 02:30 AM // 02:30

i started a game review blog, where i review a game a week. This weeks was obvious because i started it this week. for the first game i chose GW. Next week will be selected by email. so if you want a game reviewed come check out my blog http://vidgamerevies.blogspot.com/ and send me an email or drop me a comment

FlamingMetroid · Aug 18, 2009, 02:41 AM // 02:41

I'm sure "El Perma Shadow" has excellent opinions about video games.

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Well since i give an unbiased review on all the video games (yes including WoW)

If there was no bias, then why even mention WoW? You might as well of said "I am biased against WoW" with that statement.

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Although the main reason I like this game is that there is absolutely NO monthly fees.

If that's the main reason you like a game, It says one of two things: either "I have low standards and will enjoy a game just because its free or cheap" or "the gameplay itself is not good enough to be more notable than the price" Neither of those statements have good impacts on your review.

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My overall review is my personal review, I do not like ridiculous amounts of grind therefore that took points off for me, The in game mod involvement also dropped my score a little bit more because certain mods did not help me when i was younger and got scammed on a droknars run, however when you contact support on there site Guildwars.com/support I was answered almost with in the next 10 minutes and answered on my question promptly(was not using this email at the time) However the storyline is amazing and the graphics are more realistic then most games.

that is a huge mother loving run-on.

You review is very short and not very detailed, at first glance I though that what showed up on your blog was only a piece of the review and the rest of it could be seen by clicking on the entry's page. You basically just say something is good, then give little to no justification for the statement.

El Perma Shadow · Aug 18, 2009, 03:10 AM // 03:10

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Originally Posted by FlamingMetroid

I'm sure "El Perma Shadow" has excellent opinions about video games.

If there was no bias, then why even mention WoW? You might as well of said "I am biased against WoW" with that statement.

If that's the main reason you like a game, It says one of two things: either "I have low standards and will enjoy a game just because its free or cheap" or "the gameplay itself is not good enough to be more notable than the price" Neither of those statements have good impacts on your review.

that is a huge mother loving run-on.

You review is very short and not very detailed, at first glance I though that what showed up on your blog was only a piece of the review and the rest of it could be seen by clicking on the entry's page. You basically just say something is good, then give little to no justification for the statement.

im not biased but some of my viewers are against WoW, then again Ive played wow and didnt like anything about it but im still going to give them a decent fair review, as for the long run on sentence, ive been in the same English class a few times as i dont understand it(like my teacher said)
Oh look another one!

also i didnt want to talk about the email thing because it was a touchy subject i had asked about and dont want that lead back to me